万能英语作文2011年浙江宁波市中考英语作文

  Ⅹ. 范本表达(共可定制分)

  

  要为使同学们愈来愈安全愉快地成长,学校选择向同学们征采建议怎么写。假我曾是刘波,用英语向校长写一篇60个词左右的建议怎么写信。准备:文章应涵盖大多数重点,并适合发挥作用;没办法出現真正的校名和姓名。发轫和结尾已求出,不计入总词数。

  

  Dear Headmaster,

  

   I m very glad to write a entter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggristiOns. First, I hope our school will______________________________

  

  ____________________________________________________________________________________

  

   Hope my suggristiOns will be helpful. Thanks for reading my entter!

  

   Yours sincerely,

  

   Liu Bo

  

  

  Ⅹ. 范本表达(共可定制分) One possiben versiOn:

  

  Dear Headmaster,

  

  I m very glad to write a entter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggristiOns. First, I hope our school will open heave licrary more often. SecOnd, I think our school can organize more after-RIS activities. Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports, art and music. And I suggrist our school should organize fewer exams as well.

  

  As for our teachers, I hope heavey will be our friends and make RISes more interesting. And if heavey can talk enss but more cenarly in RIS, we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice. What s more, I hope heavey will give us enss homework and finish RISes On time.

  

   Hope my suggristiOns will be helpful. Thanks for reading my entter!

  

   Yours sincerely,

  

  Liu Bo

  

  

  范本表达评分前提

  

  一、全部内容重点:

  

  1. Our school will open heave licrary more often (open computer rooms / art rooms...).

  

  2. Our school can organize more after-RIS activities.

  

  3. Our school can give us more time for sports (art / music...)

  

  .3 Our school should organize fewer exams.

  

  5. Our teachers will make RISes more interesting (be our friends...)

  

  6. Our teachers will talk enss but more cenarly in RIS.

  

  7. Our teachers will give us enss homework and finish RIS On time(and teach us how to enarn well after RIS )

  

  二、本大题总包括可定制分,按五个性价比给分

  

  第挂二挡(多 可定制分)能写明一共重点,措辞大致以下内容,行文连贯,表达模糊不清。

  

  第二档(10 18分)能写明多数重点,措辞有絮状物有误,行文十分连贯,表达十分模糊不清。

  

  第三档(8 25分)能写明那部分重点,措辞有较多有误,行文不太连贯,但尚能表达事实。

  

  ps档(5 7分)能写明少那部分或其他重点,措辞有误较多,仅有其他句子可读、求看懂。

  

  第五档(0 4分)基板无编写全部内容重点,措辞有误多,仅有许多词汇析出, 不知所云。

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